Tuesday, 24 September 2019

My Product Summary Draft 1

As stated in the article, apple watch series 4 is an useful device where eveything can be done in a ease of manner. It is basically a compilation of internet of things.

This series 4 watch has manily two sizes, 40 and 44mm respectively. It consists of gold stainless steel with a Milanese band, Silver and space black stainless steel. It is equipped with 64 bit dual core processor which is twice faster with a 18 hour battery life, resulting in higher usage supporting for all types of outdoor activities.

It contains basic effective applications such as ECG measurement where your reading can be obtained through your wrist, fitness tracker, a heart rate detector which notifies when heart pumping rate is low. There is an extra added application called the breate application. This application basically helps to calm down the heart rate and maintain controlled breathing. The speaker of the watch is totally enhanced with 50 percent increase in volume.

Moreover the microphone is also placed further apart from the speaker which results in noise cancellation, thus improving the quality of a phone call made. The above stated are the main attractive features found in seiries 4 Apple Watch.

By Brenda.S , Mark.J (2019) Apple Watch Series 4: Everything you need to know [ONLINE] Digital Trends. Available at:
https://www.google.com/amp/s/www.digitaltrends.com/wearables/apple-watch-series-4-news/%3famp Accessed on 22 Sept 2019.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Mitthoon,

    Interesting Article. You were able to clearly the state the features of your product. I think you could add in your own analysis of your summary.

    Regards
    Haziq

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  3. Hi Mitthoon,

    It was nice reading your article on the Apple Watch series 4 as it contained interesting features that kept me curious. I did not know that the Apple Watch had a microphone, this was an informative summary! The summary was also very clear and straight to the point.

    Thanks for the good read!
    Regards,
    Darren

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  4. Dear Mitthoon,

    - Spelling errors: “eveything”, “manily"
    - Some grammar and punctuation errors
    - Content is slightly too detailed, mentioning too in depth about the specifications

    - The features are paraphrased appropriately while retaining the original meaning
    - The article was interesting to read
    - Citation is done very well

    Evaluated by: Darren, Chuang Yuan, Nicholas

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